Shibuya Rin (Pocket re draw)-The iDOLM@STER

Back when I first drew her I said I felt like I could of drew her better so here is my second attempt and I think it wen't a lot better mainly due to the body shaping. I spent a lot of the sketch time on the body as I felt I kept messing up the sides and pocket positions, then the collar angle was a bit of a struggle too but after many attempts I felt happy with each section and the head was a breeze by comparison lol. Next time I draw her I will try a different pose, sorry the first attempt felt too simple so I wanted to try and draw a less basic one plus I wanted to draw her a bit taller than the first one which worked pretty well =^-^=.

For her cardigan I contemplated using a regular gray tone for the brighter sections, however I decided that blue gray is just the better choice for its colour in my eyes. One of the issues I had with drawing the body is I drew the right arm too far out which resulted in me drawing the right side too wide so I moved the right arm more inwards to try and fix it. It mostly go cut off in the picture but I drew her skirt which I used gray for which was another reason for only making the cardigan blue gray. Her hair was pretty straight forward but I a weird choice I made was to have her collar appear over the hair, I did it as I felt it didn't look as good behind the hair but it was a bit of an odd call to be honest. The cardigan looks a lot less flat than the first attempt and I think the pose worked a lot better this time .